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EDIT: hair.

Mayaj's character Jos. :D His face is my favorite part. the EYES. His hair turned out a little more kinky than wavy....do I need to redraw it?

Seriously need to take a nap before work today.

"Small and very slender - but not skinny - and pale with a roundish young looking face with a pointed chin. Large black eyes and full ruddy lips. Soft fluffy looking black hair - wavy past the ears in front and just above the shoulders in back. Dresses in brown leather breeches, boots, white shirt and black vest. Oh, and black fingerless glove on his left hand. I think that's about it...."
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:iconnaturesglory:
Well, the positives definitely outweighed the negatives...

Ugh, I hate this part -- negative criticism.
I understood that with his face, you were going for an angled view, but it kind of ended up uneven. His left eye was a lot bigger than his right. Also, it seemed that with the effect of his left eye and his ear, that his face was, erm, melting off of his face like wax (sorry for harsh terms!).

Ack, no more evil bad critiques from me!

I DID like the clothes affects. Another thing I won't understand is how artists know where to draw the seemingly random lines that make the folds in the clothes realistic; good eye!
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:iconkid-apocalypse:
Darn, wish I'd had you around when I was still working on this. ;p I'm pretty sure I can mostly blame the weird pout he has for the melt effect, though. :giggle:

Thanks! It's all down to observation and trial and error, really. Looking at other people's art helps a lot.
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:iconnaturesglory:
In that case, Ill try to get my stuff on as soon as possible =p You might need a demonstration of what NOT to do :D
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:iconkid-apocalypse:
:giggle: I often demonstrate that myself....
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:iconnaturesglory:
:o
Your modesty can't fool us! We know talent when we see it!
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:iconkid-apocalypse:
:blush: You say "talent", I say "potential"...
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:iconnaturesglory:
Correction, :nod: everyone says "talent", YOU say "potential". :no:
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:iconkid-apocalypse:
....point conceded.
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:iconhagge:
Hagge Jul 31, 2007  Professional General Artist
WOW! :wow:
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