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EDIT: hair.

Mayaj's character Jos. :D His face is my favorite part. the EYES. His hair turned out a little more kinky than wavy....do I need to redraw it?

Seriously need to take a nap before work today.

"Small and very slender - but not skinny - and pale with a roundish young looking face with a pointed chin. Large black eyes and full ruddy lips. Soft fluffy looking black hair - wavy past the ears in front and just above the shoulders in back. Dresses in brown leather breeches, boots, white shirt and black vest. Oh, and black fingerless glove on his left hand. I think that's about it...."
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NaturesGlory Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2007
Well, the positives definitely outweighed the negatives...

Ugh, I hate this part -- negative criticism.
I understood that with his face, you were going for an angled view, but it kind of ended up uneven. His left eye was a lot bigger than his right. Also, it seemed that with the effect of his left eye and his ear, that his face was, erm, melting off of his face like wax (sorry for harsh terms!).

Ack, no more evil bad critiques from me!

I DID like the clothes affects. Another thing I won't understand is how artists know where to draw the seemingly random lines that make the folds in the clothes realistic; good eye!
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Kid-Apocalypse Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2007
Darn, wish I'd had you around when I was still working on this. ;p I'm pretty sure I can mostly blame the weird pout he has for the melt effect, though. :giggle:

Thanks! It's all down to observation and trial and error, really. Looking at other people's art helps a lot.
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NaturesGlory Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2007
In that case, Ill try to get my stuff on as soon as possible =p You might need a demonstration of what NOT to do :D
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Kid-Apocalypse Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2007
:giggle: I often demonstrate that myself....
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NaturesGlory Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2007
:o
Your modesty can't fool us! We know talent when we see it!
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Kid-Apocalypse Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2007
:blush: You say "talent", I say "potential"...
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NaturesGlory Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2007
Correction, :nod: everyone says "talent", YOU say "potential". :no:
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Kid-Apocalypse Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2007
....point conceded.
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Hagge Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2007  Professional General Artist
WOW! :wow:
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Kid-Apocalypse Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2007
:blushes: Thanks....
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Hagge Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2007  Professional General Artist
More than welcome! Boy your work is evolving so impressively!!
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Kid-Apocalypse Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2007
Thank you....that means a lot.
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Mayaj Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2007
Oh he's LOVELY!!! :D Hee, but his hair is a little too kinky... it's rounder,curves with his head a little more. But everything else is perfect! :D
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Kid-Apocalypse Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2007
Thought so. Gonna fix it. :D
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Mayaj Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2007
So friggin awesome though!!!!!!!
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Kid-Apocalypse Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2007
Better now?
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Mayaj Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2007
PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Kid-Apocalypse Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2007
:phew: Oh good. I'll give him colors and a background after I get home from work. :D
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Mayaj Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2007
yyyay!
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Kid-Apocalypse Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2007
...now must sleep. :)
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