Chopstick doodle. the perspective is....wonky. I know. Does anyone have tips for me that DON'T include looking at a stupid bare mattress on the floor? Because I don't exactly have one handy.
Since I'm lazy, I'll probably just go with the wonky version and pretend I was going for the American McGee's Alice effect.
That wall clock needs to be sold at Wal-Mart. Somebody call somebody and make it so.
Oh, that...the short ends of the slats need to be drawn at more of an angle is all...but for the style you've begun there, it works out to your advantage either way.
Personally I don't think you should change anyrhing, this is gorgeous! But if you want - the trick to drawing something against a wall is to have the top half come out a little farther than the bottom.